Advert Feedback

I printed off a copy of my advert and carried round a colour version on my phone to show people my design. I then got feedback, from my target audience,which followed as:

Positive:

• Exciting but not over powering 
• Central picture is good and he uses a good direct mode of address
• Artist stands out against background
• Font is good, really original design
• Simple but effective in advertising what it is
• Simple design but looks really good
• Very specific to the artist. Proves effective in the main selling point
• Looks very professional. I like the lighting.

Negative:

• 'Groundbraking' is hard to read
• Too dark but works well for the genre of the album cover. Could be argued as triking due to the contrasting colours
• Flower lights might not symbolise love enough. If done again, maybe consider using heart lights or rose lights